wind

The colouration and the whole lineart-work is really something my eyes enjoy looking at. You can really tell that you've kept in mind where the sun shines and not. There are some places though where the lines maybe need to be a little bit thicker. Like the end of the scarf, where it turns to flowers. But it does work beautifully within the picture itself.

The nose could be a little bit more centred though, because it looks like he has got a small and flat nose. That maybe the cause, but here it does look a little weird.
Also, the hair doesn't go under the eye patch, like the patch being very light and not tied to his head that very tight. Maybe it's going to fall down soon?

Other than that it is a very nice work and I love the use of colours, not so many traditional artists use other colours for shading except black and other darker colours.